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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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FYI- Nightshade is the kender and Krell is the Bone Acolyte. Atta and Nightshade pursued Mina, while Rhys lay imprisoned in the magical bands that Krell had wrapped around him. Nightshade and Atta quickly encountered the Red-Robed mage Jenna, the Head of the Conclave of Wizards. Before Nightshade continued to pursue Mina, he sent Jenna to aid Rhys in getting free of Krell’s magic and defeating the Bone Acolyte. Nightshade and Atta followed Mina outside of Solace, where they continued to trail her northwards, and upon locating her, they made her understand that she did not need to run away since Rhys and the kender understood the danger of taking Mina to Godshome, but did it because they cared about her
  

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While Rhys lay imprisoned in the magical bands that Krell had wrapped around him, Atta and Nightshade pursued Mina. They soon encountered the red-robed mage Jenna, the Head of the Conclave of Wizards. Before they continued their pursuit, Nightshade sent Jenna to help free Rhys from Krell’s magic and defeat the Bone Acolyte.

  • While Rhys lay imprisoned in the magical bands that Krell had wrapped around him, Atta and Nightshade pursued Mina.
  • They soon encountered the red-robed mage Jenna, the Head of the Conclave of Wizards.
  • Before they continued their pursuit, Nightshade sent Jenna to help free Rhys from Krell’s magic and defeat the Bone Acolyte.
  • Then they followed Mina out of Solace and continued to trail her northwa rds.
  • Locating her, they made her understand that she did not need to flee, since Rhys and the kender understood the danger of taking Mina to Godshome, but did it nevertheless because they cared about her.
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While Rhys lay imprisoned in the magical bands that Krell had wrapped around him, Atta and Nightshade pursued Mina. They soon encountered the red-robed mage Jenna, the Head of the Conclave of Wizards. Before they continued their pursuit, Nightshade sent Jenna to help free Rhys from Krell’s magic and defeat the Bone Acolyte.

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