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Every night, before Mina would go to bed, Goldmoon would brush her long dark red hair while telling her stories of the old gods and how sad she was that they were gone. After hearing these stories, Mina vowed to help her mother by finding the true gods and bringing them back to the world of Krynn. In about 418 AC, at the age of fourteen, Mina heard the call of Takhisis’s voice, a voice that she first remembered from when her ship was sinking years earlier. The voice was the one that was responsible for saving Mina from the shipwreck and had sang to her as she was sent to Schallsea.
  

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Every night befor e Mina went to bed, Goldmoon would brush her long dark red hair while telling her stories of the old gods and how sad she was that they were go ne. Mina vowed to cheer her mother by finding the true gods and returning them to Krynn . In about 418 AC, at the age of fourteen, Mina heard the call of Takhisis’s voice, which she first heard when her ship was sinking years earlier.

  • Every night befor e Mina went to bed, Goldmoon would brush her long dark red hair while telling her stories of the old gods and how sad she was that they were go ne.
  • Mina vowed to cheer her mother by finding the true gods and returning them to Krynn .
  • In about 418 AC, at the age of fourteen, Mina heard the call of Takhisis’s voice, which she first heard when her ship was sinking years earlier.
  • That voice had been responsible for saving Mina from the shipwreck and had sung to her as she was sent to Schallsea.
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Every night before Mina went to bed, Goldmoon would brush her long dark red hair while telling her stories of the old gods and how sad she was that they were gone. Mina vowed to cheer her mother by finding the true gods and returning them to Krynn. In about 418 AC, at the age of fourteen, Mina heard the call of Takhisis’s voice, which she first heard

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