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While within the Tarsian court, Alhana was roughly handled in front of a young Solamnic Knight-to-be named Sturm Brightblade, who did not agree with her treatment and helped her to her feet, not knowing that she was an elven princess. As soon as their eyes met, there were instantly feelings of affection between the two. Alhana was then sentenced to imprisonment in the city jail along with Sturm and his companions: Tanis Half-Elven, the Qualinesti prince Gilthanas Kanan, and the dwarf Flint Fireforge
  

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At the Tarsian court, Alhana was roughly handled in front of a young Solamnic Knight-to-be named Sturm Brightblade, who did not agree with her treatment and helped her to her feet, not knowing that she was an elven princess. As soon as their eyes met, affection sprung up between the two. Alhana was sentenced to imprisonment in the city jail along with Sturm and his companio ns, Tanis Half-Elven, the Qualinesti prince Gilthanas Kanan, and the dwarf Flint Fireforge .

— Mister Micawber

  • At the Tarsian court, Alhana was roughly handled in front of a young Solamnic Knight-to-be named Sturm Brightblade, who did not agree with her treatment and helped her to her feet, not knowing that she was an elven princess.
  • As soon as their eyes met, affection sprung up between the two.
  • Alhana was sentenced to imprisonment in the city jail along with Sturm and his companio ns, Tanis Half-Elven, the Qualinesti prince Gilthanas Kanan, and the dwarf Flint Fireforge .
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At the Tarsian court, Alhana was roughly handled in front of a young Solamnic Knight-to-be named Sturm Brightblade, who did not agree with her treatment and helped her to her feet, not knowing that she was an elven princess. As soon as their eyes met, affection sprung up between the two. Alhana was sentenced to imprisonment in the city jail along with Sturm and his companio
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