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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Silvanoshei was held prisoner until Mina revealed that she had faked her own death in order to expose her secret enemy, Targonne, who she immediately had executed. After Mina assumed complete authority over the Dark Knights, she decided to depart Silvanesti, which left Silvanoshei heartbroken.
  

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Silvanoshei was held prisoner until Mina revealed that she had faked her own death in order to expose her secret enemy, Targonne, whom she immediately had executed. After Mina assumed complete authority over the Dark Knights, she decided to depart Silvanesti , leaving Silvanoshei heartbroken.

  • Silvanoshei was held prisoner until Mina revealed that she had faked her own death in order to expose her secret enemy, Targonne, whom she immediately had executed.
  • After Mina assumed complete authority over the Dark Knights, she decided to depart Silvanesti , leaving Silvanoshei heartbroken.
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Silvanoshei was held prisoner until Mina revealed that she had faked her own death in order to expose her secret enemy, Targonne, whom she immediately had executed. After Mina assumed complete authority over the Dark Knights, she decided to depart Silvanesti, leaving Silvanoshei heartbroken.

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