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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Learning of the dragonarmies in his travels and the promises of wealth, power, and pleasures that the evil goddess Takhisis was offering her servants, Bakaris quickly joined the dark forces and worked his way into a position of power within the Blue Dragonarmy. After becoming infatuated with the attractive Kitiara, Bakaris aided her in becoming a Dragon Highlord in order to further his own career.
  

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Learning of the dragonarmies in his travels and the promises of wealth, power, and pleasure that the evil goddess Takhisis was offering her servants, Bakaris promptly joined the dark forces and worked his way up the ranks of the Blue Dragonarmy. Infatuated with the attractive Kitiara, Bakaris aided her in becoming a Dragon Highlord in order to further his own career.

  • Learning of the dragonarmies in his travels and the promises of wealth, power, and pleasure that the evil goddess Takhisis was offering her servants, Bakaris promptly joined the dark forces and worked his way up the ranks of the Blue Dragonarmy.
  • Infatuated with the attractive Kitiara, Bakaris aided her in becoming a Dragon Highlord in order to further his own career.
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Learning of the dragonarmies in his travels and the promises of wealth, power, and pleasure that the evil goddess Takhisis was offering her servants, Bakaris promptly joined the dark forces and worked his way up the ranks of the Blue Dragonarmy. Infatuated with the attractive Kitiara, Bakaris aided her in becoming a Dragon Highlord in order to further his own career.

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