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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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The other dwarves, including Pwent, arrived at the battle in the forge room at that time, though the battlerager quickly went after Bruenor in order to protect him. Dahlia and Drizzt gained the advantage in the fight until Valindra began to unleash her magic; however, the lich was wounded and driven away by Jarlaxle, who had not been defeated but saved by the same ring that had allowed Dahlia to fake her own death.
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The other dwarves, including Pwent, then arrived at the battle in the forge room , and the battlerager quickly went after Bruenor in order to protect him. Dahlia and Drizzt gained the ad vantage until Valindra began to unleash her magic. The lich was wounded and driven away by Jarlaxle, who had been saved by the same ring that had helped Dahlia fake her own death.
- The other dwarves, including Pwent, then arrived at the battle in the forge room , and the battlerager quickly went after Bruenor in order to protect him.
- Dahlia and Drizzt gained the ad vantage until Valindra began to unleash her magic.
- The lich was wounded and driven away by Jarlaxle, who had been saved by the same ring that had helped Dahlia fake her own death.
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The other dwarves, including Pwent, then arrived at the battle in the forge room, and the battlerager quickly went after Bruenor in order to protect him. Dahlia and Drizzt gained the advantage until Valindra began to unleash her magic. The lich was wounded and driven away by Jarlaxle, who had been saved by the same ring that had helped Dahlia fake her
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Note that "went after" connotes an attack, so you might want to consider rephrasing that portion of the sentence. It's odd to read that someone went after someone else in order to protect them.
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