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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Pursued through the Gray Forest by the Cult of the Dragon’s minions, the injured Taegan was saved by the faerie dragon Jivex, who used his illusion magic to throw off the avariel’s hunters. Taegan was healed by the elven spirits dwelling within the ancient gray trees of the forest, and hoped to still be able to destroy the Cult’s operation by reassembling the scattered and fleeing remnants of the Impilturan army.
  

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Hi I think Avariel takes a capital Some writers would prefer 'hoped still to be able to' Apart from that, it looks good Dave

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  • Hi I think Avariel takes a capital Some writers would prefer 'hoped still to be able to' Apart from that, it looks good Dave
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Hi

I think Avariel takes a capital

Some writers would prefer 'hoped still to be able to'

Apart from that, it looks good

Dave
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