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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Meanwhile, Brimstone, after learning of his comrades’ capture, traveled to Sossal to inform Zethrindor that Iyraclea had broken her pact with Sammaster and was seeking the power that was hidden within the ruins in the Novularond Mountains.
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So let's make it a bit shorter:
Meanwhile, Brimstone, learning of his comrades’ capture, traveled to Sossal to inform Zethrindor that Iyraclea had broken her pact with Sammaster and was seeking the power hidden within the ruins in the Novularond Mountains.
Meanwhile, Brimstone, learning of his comrades’ capture, traveled to Sossal to inform Zethrindor that Iyraclea had broken her pact with Sammaster and was seeking the power hidden within the ruins in the Novularond Mountains.
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