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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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While the lords wanted to devote all of Impiltur’s military power to suppress the dragons who were devastating the settled parts of the country, Sambryl was convinced by Taegan to send at least a lesser force west to access the situation there. Lord Rangrim, a paladin of Ilmater, volunteered to lead this smaller force, which would also be accompanied by Taegan and strengthened by six of the bronze dragons who served the queen.
  

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While the lords wanted to devote all of Impiltur’s military power to suppress the drag ons devastat ing the settled parts of the country, Taegan convinced Sambryl to send at least a lesser force west to assess the situation there. Lord Rangrim, a paladin of Ilmater, volunteered to lead this force, which would also be accompanied by Taegan and strengthened by six of the queen's bronze dragons.

  • While the lords wanted to devote all of Impiltur’s military power to suppress the drag ons devastat ing the settled parts of the country, Taegan convinced Sambryl to send at least a lesser force west to assess the situation there.
  • Lord Rangrim, a paladin of Ilmater, volunteered to lead this force, which would also be accompanied by Taegan and strengthened by six of the queen's bronze dragons.
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While the lords wanted to devote all of Impiltur’s military power to suppress the dragons devastating the settled parts of the country, Taegan convinced Sambryl to send at least a lesser force west to assess the situation there. Lord Rangrim, a paladin of Ilmater, volunteered to lead this force, which would also be accompanied by Taegan and strengthened by six of the

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