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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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As a child, Vhostym stood on the surface of Toril only once beside his father. He stood under an eclipse, the "Crown of Flame", in his own corporeal body, and following that event he continually but unsuccessfully tried to eliminate his skin sensitivity.
  

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As a child, Vhostym stood on the surface of Toril only once beside his father. He stood under an eclipse, the "Crown of Flame", in his own corporeal body, and from then on he continually but unsuccessfully tried to eliminate his skin sensitivity.

  • As a child, Vhostym stood on the surface of Toril only once beside his father.
  • He stood under an eclipse, the "Crown of Flame", in his own corporeal body, and from then on he continually but unsuccessfully tried to eliminate his skin sensitivity.
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As a child, Vhostym stood on the surface of Toril only once beside his father. He stood under an eclipse, the "Crown of Flame", in his own corporeal body, and from then on he continually but unsuccessfully tried to eliminate his skin sensitivity.

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