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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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However, this all changed in 1477 DR, when Geran battled the powerful moon elf mage Rhovann Disarnnyl, the rival contender for the love of Alliere, in a tournament between the defenders of Myth Drannor.
  

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However, this all changed in 1477 DR, when Geran battled the powerful moon elf mage Rhovann Disarnnyl, his rival for the love of Alliere, in a tournament between the defenders of Myth Drannor.

  • However, this all changed in 1477 DR, when Geran battled the powerful moon elf mage Rhovann Disarnnyl, his rival for the love of Alliere, in a tournament between the defenders of Myth Drannor.
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However, this all changed in 1477 DR, when Geran battled the powerful moon elf mage Rhovann Disarnnyl, his rival for the love of Alliere, in a tournament between the defenders of Myth Drannor.

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