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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Upon finding Dorn, the mage saved his life by creating metal golem parts that would make up the left side of his body. These plates and parts had to be replaced multiple times over the years as Dorn aged and outgrew them, which was an agonizing process.
  

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The mage found Dorn and saved his life by creating metal golem parts to make up the left side of his body. These plates and parts had to be replaced multiple times over the years as Dorn aged and outgrew them, which was an agonizing process.

  • The mage found Dorn and saved his life by creating metal golem parts to make up the left side of his body.
  • These plates and parts had to be replaced multiple times over the years as Dorn aged and outgrew them, which was an agonizing process.
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The mage found Dorn and saved his life by creating metal golem parts to make up the left side of his body. These plates and parts had to be replaced multiple times over the years as Dorn aged and outgrew them, which was an agonizing process.

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