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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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The contest quickly escalated into a brutal dual that ended when Geran cut off Rhovann’s hand, which was an action that not only shocked and horrified him, but also lost him the love of Alliere and resulted in him being permanently banished from the city.
  

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The contest quickly escalated into a brutal dual that ended when Geran cut off Rhovann’s hand, which not only shocked and horrified him, but also lost him the love of Alliere and resulted in his banishment from the city.

  • The contest quickly escalated into a brutal dual that ended when Geran cut off Rhovann’s hand, which not only shocked and horrified him, but also lost him the love of Alliere and resulted in his banishment from the city.
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The contest quickly escalated into a brutal dual that ended when Geran cut off Rhovann’s hand, which not only shocked and horrified him, but also lost him the love of Alliere and resulted in his banishment from the city.

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