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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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The new class listened to days of hateful rhetoric directed against the drow’s many enemies until finally at the end the Grand Melee occurred, which was a contest that would be held every year where the twenty-five students would battle each other for rank.
  

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The new class listened to days of hateful rhetoric directed against the drow’s many enemies until the Grand Melee at the end, an annual contest in which the twenty-five students battled each other for rank.

  • The new class listened to days of hateful rhetoric directed against the drow’s many enemies until the Grand Melee at the end, an annual contest in which the twenty-five students battled each other for rank.
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The new class listened to days of hateful rhetoric directed against the drow’s many enemies until the Grand Melee at the end, an annual contest in which the twenty-five students battled each other for rank.

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