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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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A lengthy battle occurred between Jeggred and Ryld in a large swamp in which the demon determinedly pursued the drow warrior even after being interrupted by many local beasts and a group of human loggers.
  

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In a large swamp, a lengthy battle between Jeggred and Ryld occurred, in which the demon determinedly pursued the drow warrior even after being intercepted by beasts and a gang of human loggers.

  • In a large swamp, a lengthy battle between Jeggred and Ryld occurred, in which the demon determinedly pursued the drow warrior even after being intercepted by beasts and a gang of human loggers.
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In a large swamp, a lengthy battle between Jeggred and Ryld occurred, in which the demon determinedly pursued the drow warrior even after being intercepted by beasts and a gang of human loggers.

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