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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Palin was attached to the band of Solamnics as a mage and was captured, and took his brothers’ bodies back to Solace with the Dark Knight Steel Brightblade for a proper burial. As a tribute, Steel placed Sturm’s broken spear upon his grave, and a vallenwood tree was planted over his grave in the tradition of the people of Solace.
  

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Palin was attached to the band of Solamnics as a mag e, was captured, and took his brothers’ bodies back to Solace with the Dark Knight Steel Brightblade for a proper burial. As a tribute, Steel placed Sturm’s broken spear upon his grave, and a vallenwood tree was planted on it in the tradition of the people of Solace.

  • Palin was attached to the band of Solamnics as a mag e, was captured, and took his brothers’ bodies back to Solace with the Dark Knight Steel Brightblade for a proper burial.
  • As a tribute, Steel placed Sturm’s broken spear upon his grave, and a vallenwood tree was planted on it in the tradition of the people of Solace.
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Palin was attached to the band of Solamnics as a mage, was captured, and took his brothers’ bodies back to Solace with the Dark Knight Steel Brightblade for a proper burial. As a tribute, Steel placed Sturm’s broken spear upon his grave, and a vallenwood tree was planted on it in the tradition of the people of Solace.

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