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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Is this all completely correct? Porthios is the elven king

Prior to the battle, the Silvanesti noble Reyl Konnal betrayed Porthios and told the dark army how the elven king planned to attack the small southern island that they occupied. When Porthios’s army began their assault, well over half their numbers were killed in an ambush before the elves could defeat the enemy force.
  

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'betrayed Porthios by telling the dark army how the elven king had planned....' sounds better I think.
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cboutin3 Prior to the battle, the Silvanesti noble Reyl Konnal betrayed Porthios and told the dark army how the elven king planned to attack the small southern island that they occupied. When Porthios’s army began their assault, well over half their numbers were killed in an ambush before the elves could defeat the enemy force.
Who occupied? I can't attempt a
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Thanks for your help and it is the dark army that occupied the island.
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Prior to the battle, the Silvanesti noble Reyl Konnal betrayed the elven king Porthios's plan to attack the dark army on the small southern island that they occupied. Consequently, when the elves began their assault, well over half their number were killed in an ambush before they defeated their enemy.
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