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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Prisoners captured during the brief battle revealed that they were only part of a scouting party for a much larger band. The prisoners explained that their comrades who had survived the battle would return to the main force and that the nomads would then destroy all of Juramona’s defenders. Hearing this news, Tol continued the training of the militia in preparation for the coming assault. Two days later, the Ergothians found themselves facing an attack from a gathered nomad force consisting of every raider in the Eastern Hundred. When the thousands of plainsmen charged the militia, the Ergothian pikemen held firm and repelled the enemy. Seeing the Ergothians’ bravery, the three chiefs who commanded the nomads ordered a short parley between the two armies so that they could meet with Tol. The chiefs revealed themselves to be Ulur of the Tall Grass Riders, Mattohoc of the Sand Treaders, and Tokasin of the Firepath tribe, who was the overall leader of the warband. The nomads presented Tol with an offer; the Ergothians could surrender and depart Juramona or be slaughtered. After Tol declined the chiefs’ offer, the plainsmen once again attacked the soldiers of the militia.
  

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Captured prisoners revealed that they were part of a scouting party for a much larger force. They explained that their surviving comrades would return to the main force and then the nomads would then destroy all of Juramona’s defenders. Hearing this, Tol intensified the training of the militia to prepare for the assault.

  • Captured prisoners revealed that they were part of a scouting party for a much larger force.
  • They explained that their surviving comrades would return to the main force and then the nomads would then destroy all of Juramona’s defenders.
  • Hearing this, Tol intensified the training of the militia to prepare for the assault.
  • Two days later, the Ergothians faced an attack from a nomad force consisting of every raider in the Eastern Hundred.
  • When the thousands of plainsmen charged the militia, the Ergothian pikemen held firm and repelled them.
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Captured prisoners revealed that they were part of a scouting party for a much larger force. They explained that their surviving comrades would return to the main force and then the nomads would then destroy all of Juramona’s defenders. Hearing this, Tol intensified the training of the militia to prepare for the assault. Two days later, the Ergothians faced an attack from a nomad force consisti

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