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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Tol and the Dom-shu sisters rented a large house in the Quarry district near the Inner City, where the warlord would have easy access to the palace. That night, Tol was given the special privilege of standing vigil over the late emperor’s body in the Tower of Sorcery. When he arrived at the Tower, Tol was shocked to discover that Valaran would be joining him on the nightlong vigil. Although the two were unable to talk during the vigil, the old passion between the couple began to rekindle. Also during that time, Nazramin and Mandes met to discuss their failed attempts to kill Tol and their plan to slowly drive Amaltar insane with the use of image magic.
  

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Tol and the Dom-shu sisters rented a large house in the Quarry District near the Inner City, affording the warlord easy access to the palace. That night, Tol was given the privilege of standing vigil over the late emperor’s body in the Tower of Sorcery. When he arrived at the Tower, Tol was shocked to discover that Valaran would be joining him.

— Mister Micawber

  • Tol and the Dom-shu sisters rented a large house in the Quarry District near the Inner City, affording the warlord easy access to the palace.
  • That night, Tol was given the privilege of standing vigil over the late emperor’s body in the Tower of Sorcery.
  • When he arrived at the Tower, Tol was shocked to discover that Valaran would be joining him.
  • Although the two were unable to talk during the vigil, the old passion between them rekindled.
  • Meanwhile, Nazramin and Mandes met to discuss their failed attempts to kill Tol and their plan to slowly drive Amaltar insane with image magic.
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Tol and the Dom-shu sisters rented a large house in the Quarry District near the Inner City, affording the warlord easy access to the palace. That night, Tol was given the privilege of standing vigil over the late emperor’s body in the Tower of Sorcery. When he arrived at the Tower, Tol was shocked to discover that Valaran would be joining him. Although the two were unable to talk during the vi
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