0
Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Is this all completely correct?

With the outcome of the battle decided, Egrin met with Tol and informed him that Odovar had been killed in a prior ambush by the foresters. Egrin also told Tol that if it had not been for his actions, the warriors of Juramona would have all been slaughtered. Following the battle, the two Juramona hordes departed the forest and returned to the imperial camp near Caergoth to report the death of Odovar, the sighting of Dermount, and their repulse by the surprisingly well-armed and well-led forest tribes. Once they arrived at the encampment, the soldiers of Juramona learned how the war was not going as Amaltar and his advisors had anticipated. It was not just the Eagles and the Plains Panthers that had suffered large losses and defeat.
  

Top answer

With the outcome of the battle decided, Egrin met with Tol and informed him that Odovar had been killed in a forester ambush. Egrin also told Tol that but for his actions, the Juramona warriors would have all been slaughtered. Following the battle, the two Juramona hordes returned to the imperial camp near Caergoth to report Odovar's death, the sighting of Dermount, and their repulse by the surprisingly well-prepared forest tribes.

  • With the outcome of the battle decided, Egrin met with Tol and informed him that Odovar had been killed in a forester ambush.
  • Egrin also told Tol that but for his actions, the Juramona warriors would have all been slaughtered.
  • Following the battle, the two Juramona hordes returned to the imperial camp near Caergoth to report Odovar's death, the sighting of Dermount, and their repulse by the surprisingly well-prepared forest tribes.
  • Arrived at the encampment, the Jurfamona soldiers learned that the war was not going as Amaltar and his advisors had anticipated.
  • It was not just the Eagles and the Plains Panthers that had suffered large losses and defeat.
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

1 Answers
0
With the outcome of the battle decided, Egrin met with Tol and informed him that Odovar had been killed in a forester ambush. Egrin also told Tol that but for his actions, the Juramona warriors would have all been slaughtered. Following the battle, the two Juramona hordes returned to the imperial camp near Caergoth to report Odovar's death, the sighting of Dermount, and their repulse by the sur

Related Questions