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Soon thereafter, an imperial courier arrived in Juramona to relate the emperor’s orders to Odovar. The five years of peace had not been good for Odovar, having changed him from a burly and impetuous warrior who was a harsh but fair leader to a fat and sluggish ruler who was only cruel. Also over the course of the years, Tol had developed into a young man and a fine shilder who was well respected by Egrin and the other officers of the Household Guard. Egrin saw the makings of a great warrior and leader in Tol, and had become a sort of a father figure and mentor to the young man.
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Soon thereafter, an imperial courier arrived in Juramona carrying the emperor’s orders to Odovar. Five years of peace had not been good for Odovar, changing him from a burly, impetuous warrior and a harsh but fair leader into a fat, sluggish and cruel ruler. At the same time, Tol had developed into a fine young shilder well respected by Egrin and the other officers of the Household Guard.
- Soon thereafter, an imperial courier arrived in Juramona carrying the emperor’s orders to Odovar.
- Five years of peace had not been good for Odovar, changing him from a burly, impetuous warrior and a harsh but fair leader into a fat, sluggish and cruel ruler.
- At the same time, Tol had developed into a fine young shilder well respected by Egrin and the other officers of the Household Guard.
- Egrin saw the makings of a great warrior and leader in Tol, and had become a father figure and mentor to the young man.
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Soon thereafter, an imperial courier arrived in Juramona carrying the emperor’s orders to Odovar. Five years of peace had not been good for Odovar, changing him from a burly, impetuous warrior and a harsh but fair leader into a fat, sluggish and cruel ruler. At the same time, Tol had developed into a fine young shilder well respected by Egrin and the other officers of the Household Guard. Egrin
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