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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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FYI- Takhisis is the goddess and Mina is her prophet. When Mina used her army of the dead to steal the dragon skull totem of the Red Dragon Overlord Malystryx, Dalamar’s spirit told the fearsome dragon in return for her promise to restore him to life. He then agreed to Mina’s offer to betray Palin in return for his life and magic. Once Dalamar realized that Palin and the silver dragon Mirror planned to destroy the skull totem, which had been converted to Takhisis’s own use, the dark elf fulfilled his end of the deal struck with the goddess.
  

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When Mina's army of the dead stole the dragon skull totem of the Red Dragon Overlord Malystryx, Dalamar’s spirit revealed this to the fearsome dragon in return for her promise to restore him to life. He then agreed to Mina’s offer to betray Palin in return for his life and the gift of magic. Once Dalamar realized that Palin and the silver dragon Mirror planned to destroy the skull totem, which had been converted to Takhisis’s own use, the dark elf fulfilled his end of the bargain struck with the goddess.

  • When Mina's army of the dead stole the dragon skull totem of the Red Dragon Overlord Malystryx, Dalamar’s spirit revealed this to the fearsome dragon in return for her promise to restore him to life.
  • He then agreed to Mina’s offer to betray Palin in return for his life and the gift of magic.
  • Once Dalamar realized that Palin and the silver dragon Mirror planned to destroy the skull totem, which had been converted to Takhisis’s own use, the dark elf fulfilled his end of the bargain struck with the goddess.
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When Mina's army of the dead stole the dragon skull totem of the Red Dragon Overlord Malystryx, Dalamar’s spirit revealed this to the fearsome dragon in return for her promise to restore him to life. He then agreed to Mina’s offer to betray Palin in return for his life and the gift of magic. Once Dalamar realized that Palin and the silver dragon Mirror planned to des

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