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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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The elven warrior Quithas Griffontamer arrived at the site and immediately took the stone to Silvanos and the main elven army, which was fighting desperately to withstand the assault of the blue dragons and their dark allies. In an attempt to stall while Kaganos had been recovering the stone, Darlantan had fought alone against the five blue dragons, and even though he killed two of the blues, the silver dragon himself was mortally wounded. Just as the blue dragons were about to attack and massacre the elven army, Silvanos used the power of the blue stone to capture their spirits.
  

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The elven warrior Quithas Griffontamer arrived and immediately took the stone to Silvanos and the main elven army, who were fighting desperately against the blue dragons and their dark allies. In an attempt to stall while Kaganos had been recovering the stone, Darlantan had fought alone against the five blue dragons, and even though he killed two of them , the silver dragon himself was mortally wounded. Just as the blue dragons were about to attack and massacre the elven army, Silvanos used the power of the blue stone to capture their spirits.

  • The elven warrior Quithas Griffontamer arrived and immediately took the stone to Silvanos and the main elven army, who were fighting desperately against the blue dragons and their dark allies.
  • In an attempt to stall while Kaganos had been recovering the stone, Darlantan had fought alone against the five blue dragons, and even though he killed two of them , the silver dragon himself was mortally wounded.
  • Just as the blue dragons were about to attack and massacre the elven army, Silvanos used the power of the blue stone to capture their spirits.
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The elven warrior Quithas Griffontamer arrived and immediately took the stone to Silvanos and the main elven army, who were fighting desperately against the blue dragons and their dark allies. In an attempt to stall while Kaganos had been recovering the stone, Darlantan had fought alone against the five blue dragons, and even though he killed two of them, the silver

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