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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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This enraged Berem, and when he pushed Jasla down onto the column, a sharp rock pierced her temple and killed her instantly. As punishment, the dark goddess Takhisis had the green gemstone embedded in Berem’s chest, which made the distraught man immortal
  

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This enraged Berem, and he pushed Jasla down onto the column, where a sharp rock pierced her temple and killed her instantly. As punishment, the dark goddess Takhisis had the green gemstone embedded in Berem’s chest , making the distraught man immorta l.

  • This enraged Berem, and he pushed Jasla down onto the column, where a sharp rock pierced her temple and killed her instantly.
  • As punishment, the dark goddess Takhisis had the green gemstone embedded in Berem’s chest , making the distraught man immorta l.
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This enraged Berem, and he pushed Jasla down onto the column, where a sharp rock pierced her temple and killed her instantly. As punishment, the dark goddess Takhisis had the green gemstone embedded in Berem’s chest, making the distraught man immortal.

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