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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Is this advertising translation acceptable?
The following is an advertisement translated from Chinese. Would you please tell me whether the version is acceptable or not? Thank you very much.
Six Unique Superiorities
A Bottle of Mellow Liquor
Unique ecological environment makes Wuliangye can’t be copied.
Unique over 600-year-old Cellar of Ming Dynasty witnesses continuous propagation of microorganism.
Unique formula made up by five foodstuffs enables reputed top-quality Wuliangye Liquor.
Unique brewing technique enables a unique microorganism sphere above the Group locale.
Unique harmoniously refined taste makes it the embodiment of Chinese culture.
UniqueTen-MileLiquorTownmakes Wuliangye become the leader in food industry with 47.206 billion yuan brand value.
Six Unique Superiorities
A Bottle of Mellow Liquor
Unique ecological environment makes Wuliangye can’t be copied.
Unique over 600-year-old Cellar of Ming Dynasty witnesses continuous propagation of microorganism.
Unique formula made up by five foodstuffs enables reputed top-quality Wuliangye Liquor.
Unique brewing technique enables a unique microorganism sphere above the Group locale.
Unique harmoniously refined taste makes it the embodiment of Chinese culture.
UniqueTen-MileLiquorTownmakes Wuliangye become the leader in food industry with 47.206 billion yuan brand value.
Top answer
This is how I would edit your translation for English language consumption, based on how I understand what you've said: Six Unique Reasons to Choose Wuliangye Liquor This is one mellow liquor! 1. The brewing environment of Wuliangye is unique and can't be reproduced anywhere else in the world.
- This is how I would edit your translation for English language consumption, based on how I understand what you've said: Six Unique Reasons to Choose Wuliangye Liquor This is one mellow liquor!
- 1.
- The brewing environment of Wuliangye is unique and can't be reproduced anywhere else in the world.
- 2.
- The yeasts used in the brewing process of Wuliangye have been continuously culivated for 600 years.
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This is how I would edit your translation for English language consumption, based on how I understand what you've said:
Six Unique Reasons to Choose Wuliangye Liquor
This is one mellow liquor!
1. The brewing environment of Wuliangye is unique and can't be reproduced anywhere else in the world.
2. The yeasts used in the brewing process of Wuliangye have been co
Six Unique Reasons to Choose Wuliangye Liquor
This is one mellow liquor!
1. The brewing environment of Wuliangye is unique and can't be reproduced anywhere else in the world.
2. The yeasts used in the brewing process of Wuliangye have been co
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