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Rambharosey Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Is this a run on sentence?

Players of the team, one of them who is handicapped, showed great vigor in winning the match.

I understand this is not a correct sentence, but wanted to know the 'grammatical reason' why.

Thanks,
Bharosey.
  

Top answer

'. Grammatical reason: improper relative pronoun.

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  • Grammatical reason: improper relative pronoun.
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It should read 'one of whom is...'.

Grammatical reason: improper relative pronoun.

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