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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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is this a parallel structure? is this grammatically correct?

However, the practice of death penalty must be legalized because criminal’s rights need not to be respected, there isn’t a sufficient alternative to the law, and it is the best way to keep crime rates low.
  

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However, the practice of death penalty must be legalized because a criminal’s rights need not to be respected, there isn’t a sufficient alternative to the law, and it is the best way to keep crime rates low. As amended above, it is grammatically correct. It uses parallel structure (full sentences).

  • However, the practice of death penalty must be legalized because a criminal’s rights need not to be respected, there isn’t a sufficient alternative to the law, and it is the best way to keep crime rates low.
  • As amended above, it is grammatically correct.
  • It uses parallel structure (full sentences).
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However, the practice of death penalty must be legalized because a criminal’s rights need not to be respected, there isn’t a sufficient alternative to the law, and it is the best way to keep crime rates low.

As amended above, it is grammatically correct. It uses parallel structure (full sentences).

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