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Yobib Nartea Posted 11 years ago
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Is this a good thesis statement?
I'm writing an essay about how oxidation processes and its effect (in Uluru rock). This is geomorphology, do you think my thesis statement is good or should i tweak it a bit more?
Oxidation processes have made a significant impact on Uluru's morphology because it shaped Uluru's surface and altered the mineral content of the rock.
Oxidation processes have made a significant impact on Uluru's morphology because it shaped Uluru's surface and altered the mineral content of the rock.
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"they have shaped" instead of "it shaped". Otherwise, it looks good to a non-specialist. Kind regards, Michael
- "they have shaped" instead of "it shaped".
- Otherwise, it looks good to a non-specialist.
- Kind regards, Michael
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"they have shaped" instead of "it shaped". Otherwise, it looks good to a non-specialist. Kind regards, Michael
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