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Ammmandaa12 Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Is this a good introduction to my character analysis essay on To Kill A Mockingbird?
(Im not sure on a topic sentence yet.) .... Atticus Finch is that kind of father in the story. The excellent story, To Kill A Mockingbird by Harper Lee, Atticus Finch, the father of Scout and Jem, the main characters in this story, treats his children with as much respect as he would with any adult. Atticus' father skills are really outstanding compared to other fathers in the story and in real life. <--- (thesis)
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Your ideas are all right, but you need to organize them better. Here is how I would reword your opening: Although Scout and Jem are the main characters in Harper Lee's To Kill A Mockingbird , their father, Atticus Finch, is also worth studying. One of the keys to his character is that he treats his children with as much respect as he would any adult.
- Your ideas are all right, but you need to organize them better.
- Here is how I would reword your opening: Although Scout and Jem are the main characters in Harper Lee's To Kill A Mockingbird , their father, Atticus Finch, is also worth studying.
- One of the keys to his character is that he treats his children with as much respect as he would any adult.
- Atticus' fatherly skills are outstanding compared both to other fathers in the story as well as to fathers in real life.
- You want to decide what the main point is in each paragraph.
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Your ideas are all right, but you need to organize them better. Here is how I would reword your opening:
Although Scout and Jem are the main characters in Harper Lee's To Kill A Mockingbird, their father, Atticus Finch, is also worth studying. One of the keys to his character is that he treats his children with as much respect as he would any adult. Atticus' fatherly
Although Scout and Jem are the main characters in Harper Lee's To Kill A Mockingbird, their father, Atticus Finch, is also worth studying. One of the keys to his character is that he treats his children with as much respect as he would any adult. Atticus' fatherly
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hi..hi
i am stuck trying to do a major essay for english year 11. its all about making meaning.
I need a topic sentence that some how deals with the way Atticus is characterised in to kill a mockingbird.
I have
Atticus is one of the most prominent citizens in maycomb. He is characterized throughout the book by his 'absolute consistency'. He is willing to view matter from other pe
i am stuck trying to do a major essay for english year 11. its all about making meaning.
I need a topic sentence that some how deals with the way Atticus is characterised in to kill a mockingbird.
I have
Atticus is one of the most prominent citizens in maycomb. He is characterized throughout the book by his 'absolute consistency'. He is willing to view matter from other pe
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