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Fredrick Douglass author of Narrative of the life of Fredrick Douglass has changed the way people thought. He was a very strong and influential freed slave with a great mind. Katherine Lee Bates author of “ the Beautiful” was also a very influential woman that had a very positive attitude about her surroundings. They felt that since everybody else in slavery were unhappy and wasn’t showing their real interests that they can provide people with the knowledge that just because your being a slave did not mean you couldn’t be good at something . Being locked up by slave owners only made it better because that’s what made them really be influenced to become powerful.

Fredrick Douglass was a very powerful man that was enslaved ever since his child days. He wasn’t a slave that worked in the fields but he did work in his home. He was then rented for two years. Fredrick Douglass was a leader of the abolitionist movement and was well respected. A man of his word that stuck to brotherhood no matter what the situation may have been. He was an articulate and intelligent man that wasn’t believed to be a slave.



Katherine Lee Bates a powerful writer was confident about her country and felt that it was the most beautiful place. She had a supportive and well explained opinion on why she loved where she lived so much. As her being such an influential person she made people understand her perspective on live and how it should be lived. Although she lived during slavery times she did not let that stop her from enjoying life in any way.