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Jess Katz Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Is this a good email !

For me , I don't like it Emotion: big smile

Dear,

sorry for my late reply, I have attached my passport. I just received it today. I am looking forward to hearing you. For any other Questions, feel free to contact me.

Thanks in advance

Sincerely ,
  

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Dear ____ , Sorry for my late reply, I have attached my passport. I just received it today. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

— Mister Micawber

  • Dear ____ , Sorry for my late reply, I have attached my passport.
  • I just received it today.
  • I am looking forward to hearing from you.
  • For any other questions , please feel free to contact me.
  • Thank you.
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Dear____,

Sorry for my late reply, I have attached my passport. I just received it today. I am looking forward to hearing from you. For any other questions, please feel free to contact me.

Thank you.

Sincerely ,
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You have these errors.
  • You have failed to capitalise "Sorry".
  • You have capitalised "questions".
  • The comma after "reply" should be either a semi-colon or a full stop.
  • You mean "hearing from you", not "hearing you".
  • The word "thanks" is inconsistent with the register of the remainder of the letter.
I would write it like this, but most of my changes are
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