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TeacherJapan Posted 3 years ago
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Is this a correct sentence?
As a professional manufacturer, ongoing innovation and improvement are our business spirits.
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teacherJapan As a professional manufacturer, ongoing innovation and improvement are our business spirits. It's a mess. The introductory phrase is a dangler, and it doesn't make sense, to boot.
- teacherJapan As a professional manufacturer, ongoing innovation and improvement are our business spirits.
- It's a mess.
- The introductory phrase is a dangler, and it doesn't make sense, to boot.
- It seems to be saying that the fact that you are a professional manufacturer means that ongoing innovation and improvement are your business spirits.
- That would be faulty logic except that the reader knows it's just a mistake in the English.
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teacherJapanAs a professional manufacturer, ongoing innovation and improvement are our business spirits.
It's a mess. The introductory phrase is a dangler, and it doesn't make sense, to boot. It seems to be saying that the fact that you are a professional manufacturer means that ongoing innovation and improvement are your business spirits. That would be fau
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