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TeacherJapan Posted 6 years ago
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Year after year, celebrities compete with each other who is going to look cooler as they sit at the edge of a catwalk.
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teacherJapan Year after year, celebrities compete with each other who is going to look cooler as they sit at the edge of a catwalk. Year after year celebrities compete over who is going to look more fashionable sitting at the edge of the catwalk. ) CJ
- teacherJapan Year after year, celebrities compete with each other who is going to look cooler as they sit at the edge of a catwalk.
- Year after year celebrities compete over who is going to look more fashionable sitting at the edge of the catwalk.
- ) CJ
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teacherJapan Year after year, celebrities compete with each other who is going to look cooler as they sit at the edge of a catwalk.
Year after year celebrities compete over who is going to look more fashionable sitting at the edge of the catwalk.
('cool' seems too ordinary and adolescent for the topic.)
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