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TeacherJapan Posted 6 years ago
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Year after year, celebrities compete with each other who is going to look cooler as they sit at the edge of a catwalk.
  

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teacherJapan Year after year, celebrities compete with each other who is going to look cooler as they sit at the edge of a catwalk. Year after year celebrities compete over who is going to look more fashionable sitting at the edge of the catwalk. ) CJ

  • teacherJapan Year after year, celebrities compete with each other who is going to look cooler as they sit at the edge of a catwalk.
  • Year after year celebrities compete over who is going to look more fashionable sitting at the edge of the catwalk.
  • ) CJ
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teacherJapan Year after year, celebrities compete with each other who is going to look cooler as they sit at the edge of a catwalk.

Year after year celebrities compete over who is going to look more fashionable sitting at the edge of the catwalk.

('cool' seems too ordinary and adolescent for the topic.)

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