Is thie first part of this sentence correctly structured and phrased?

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While Alhana and the others were being taken to the city jail, the Solamnic Knights Derek Crownguard, Brian Donner, and Aran Tallbow rescued them from the Tarsian guards.

Elanguest · Accepted Answer

Yes. <img class='emoticon' style='Width:19px;Height:19px;' data-delaysrc='https://uat-englishforward-forums-backend.s3.us-west-2.amazonaws.com/Emoticons/1.gif' src='https://uat-englishforward-forums-backend.s3.us-west-2.amazonaws.com/Emoticons/1.gif' alt='Emotion: smile'/>

Cboutin3 · Answer

Thanks, would "As" be a better way to start the sentence than "While"?

Elanguest · Answer

Both would work fine. <img class='emoticon' style='Width:19px;Height:19px;' data-delaysrc='https://uat-englishforward-forums-backend.s3.us-west-2.amazonaws.com/Emoticons/1.gif' src='https://uat-englishforward-forums-backend.s3.us-west-2.amazonaws.com/Emoticons/1.gif' alt='Emotion: smile'/>

Is thie first part of this sentence correctly structured and phrased?

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