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Kouroshh Posted 11 years ago
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Is these sentences written correctly (thank you in advance)
I have found a way to use in my daily tasks the knowledge I gained from my chemistry education. My objective is to make minimum use of hazardous chemicals in my working place and using environmentally benign chemicals to protect the environment. I am also trained in many bio-sustainability programs such as waste management and using of food waste for bio-gas production.
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I suggest these two improvements: I have found in my daily tasks a way to use the knowledge.... (structure is more parallel)
- I suggest these two improvements: I have found in my daily tasks a way to use the knowledge....
- (structure is more parallel)
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I suggest these two improvements:
I have found in my daily tasks a way to use the knowledge.... (position of modifier)
...waste management and the use of food waste...(structure is more parallel)
I have found in my daily tasks a way to use the knowledge.... (position of modifier)
...waste management and the use of food waste...(structure is more parallel)
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Dear Philip: In this sentence: I have found a way to use in my daily tasks the knowledge I gained from my chemistry education.
What do you think if I use acquired instead of gained? Does it sounds better or there is not a very big difference.
What do you think if I use acquired instead of gained? Does it sounds better or there is not a very big difference.
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Not much difference, I think. My personal preference would be acquired, but I couldn't begin to tell you why.
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