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Kouroshh Posted 12 years ago
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Is these sentences written correctly (Thank you in advance)

As a graduate student, I believe that I have the motivation and commitment to succeed at the next level of higher education.
  

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The English is correct, but the term 'as a graduate student' makes me wonder what the ''the next level' refers to. You will still be a graduate student, won't you?

— Clive

  • The English is correct, but the term 'as a graduate student' makes me wonder what the ''the next level' refers to.
  • You will still be a graduate student, won't you?
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The English is correct, but the term 'as a graduate student' makes me wonder what the ''the next level' refers to. You will still be a graduate student, won't you?
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I meant pursuing PhD studies. I completed master degree.

Dear Clive, I have changed the sentence again. Can I ask you kindly what is your opinion now:

As a graduate student, I believe that I have the motivation and commitment facing a new challenge.
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As a graduate student, I believe that I have the motivation and commitment to face a new challenge.

You might consider quoting some examples of how you displayed motivation and commitment in your master's studies.
Examples are always good.
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