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Kouroshh Posted 12 years ago
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Is these sentences written correctly
I am passionate about the development of method for vitamin characterization by using analytical instruments which can improve product quality by quantitative determination of vitamin in infant formula for which a nutrition claim can be made on the label.
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You are trying to jam too much into one sentence. Try to break it into more than one sentence.
- You are trying to jam too much into one sentence.
- Try to break it into more than one sentence.
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You are trying to jam too much into one sentence.
Try to break it into more than one sentence.
Try to break it into more than one sentence.
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Thank you so much for your comment dear Clive. I have made a new edition. I would really apprecaite it if you can take a look at it.
I am passionate about the development of method for vitamin characterization by using analytical instruments.
Through this, i would like to improve the product (infant formula) quality by quantitative determination of vitamin for which a nutrition
I am passionate about the development of method for vitamin characterization by using analytical instruments.
Through this, i would like to improve the product (infant formula) quality by quantitative determination of vitamin for which a nutrition
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