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Kouroshh Posted 12 years ago
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Is these part of my motivation letter written correctly

I am interested about the development of methods for separation technology that can enhance the quality of final product. Furthermore, I would like to document the result of my work which can be evaluated by my colleague in the company. Ultimately, by using their valuable comments and feedback, I will try to improve my previous result. So, best quality of the final product through the best process can be achieved.
  

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I am interested in the development of separation technology methods that can enhance the quality of the final product. My research conclusions can be evaluated by my colleagues, and by using their feedback, I will try to improve my previous results. In this way, we can achieve through the best process the highest quality for the final product.

  • I am interested in the development of separation technology methods that can enhance the quality of the final product.
  • My research conclusions can be evaluated by my colleagues, and by using their feedback, I will try to improve my previous results.
  • In this way, we can achieve through the best process the highest quality for the final product.
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I am interested in the development of separation technology methods that can enhance the quality of the final product. My research conclusions can be evaluated by my colleagues, and by using their feedback, I will try to improve my previous results. In this way, we can achieve through the best process the highest quality for the final product.
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Thank you so much. I greatly appreciate your help dear Micawber.

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