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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Is there something incorrect with this sentence?
Hello,
First my sentence in question:
"Our football group is a lot bit different from the other groups of supporters is that it aims to combine not a big mob of people, but a crew that consists of people who are with genuineness, creativity and an exemplary manner of life. "
After I written down this sentence a friend said that the use of the second "is" was incorrect and suggested that it be "in", not "is" so as to look this way:
"Our football group is a lot bit different from the other groups of supporters in that it aims to combine not a big mob of people, but a crew that consists of people who are with genuineness, creativity and an exemplary manner of life. "
Do you agree?
Thanks.
First my sentence in question:
"Our football group is a lot bit different from the other groups of supporters is that it aims to combine not a big mob of people, but a crew that consists of people who are with genuineness, creativity and an exemplary manner of life. "
After I written down this sentence a friend said that the use of the second "is" was incorrect and suggested that it be "in", not "is" so as to look this way:
"Our football group is a lot bit different from the other groups of supporters in that it aims to combine not a big mob of people, but a crew that consists of people who are with genuineness, creativity and an exemplary manner of life. "
Do you agree?
Thanks.
Top answer
This is correct: Our football group is a bit different from the other groups of supporters in that it aims to attract not a big mob but a crew of people who are genuine, creative and exemplary.
- This is correct: Our football group is a bit different from the other groups of supporters in that it aims to attract not a big mob but a crew of people who are genuine, creative and exemplary.
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This is correct:
Our football group is a bit different from the other groups of supporters in that it aims to attract not a big mob but a crew of people who are genuine, creative and exemplary.
Our football group is a bit different from the other groups of supporters in that it aims to attract not a big mob but a crew of people who are genuine, creative and exemplary.
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