Is there considered to be enough research in my writing?

For a language arts multi genre research project we can research anything we want, so I did the education system in Japan. Our work can't just have content that anyone could have wrote, so please review this short piece of work I did and tell me if this is just all stuff the average person would already know, thanks!




The common Japanese Middle School Student

· 131,000 yen per student per year

· 1 student age 11-14

· 1 required school uniform

· 5 cups of general pressure cause by daily class and homework

· 1 cup of studying 2 times your year in middle school a night

· 8 teaspoons of moral courses and integrated study

· 7-8 cups of 8 1 hour subjects a day

· 1 package of 4 hours of cram school (extra schooling) a night

· 8 cups of pressure to do well on high school entrance exams




Start out by taking the 131,000 yen a student, one out of the 96% of kids in Japan that attend middle school, and the school uniform and mixing it together to start the whole thing. Immediately afterward add the studying and general pressure since they go so well together, and in a different bowl mix the moral courses and the integrated study together instead of the common American discipline. Add the subjects and the cram school to the bowl not containing the moral courses, and mix the two bowls together. Now at the end of the recipe, you can now add the 8 cups of pressure to do well on high school entrance exams to get your average Japanese middle school student.