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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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Is there anything wrong with this sentence?
"Under the management of the new owners the store is designed to serve the basic needs of the majority of people in the neighborhood."
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Anonymous Is there anything wrong with this sentence? I see nothing wrong with it. Parts are a bit weak and could be improved by editing: Under its new management, the store is designed to serve the basic needs of the neighborhood.
- Anonymous Is there anything wrong with this sentence?
- I see nothing wrong with it.
- Parts are a bit weak and could be improved by editing: Under its new management, the store is designed to serve the basic needs of the neighborhood.
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AnonymousIs there anything wrong with this sentence?I see nothing wrong with it. Parts are a bit weak and could be improved by editing:
Under its new management, the store is designed to serve the basic needs of the neighborhood.
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