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Nikoer30127 Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Is there anything wrong with this sentence?

I have been working hard for my studies of design as my future direction due to my passion of designing.

Pls correct it for me if you think you have a better way to say for this sentence.
Thanks
  

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No, that's very awkward. I've been working hard for my (design) studies because I have a (great) passion for design and would like to make it my future profession. You can omit the first "design" to avoid repetition (of "design").

— Ivanhr

  • No, that's very awkward.
  • I've been working hard for my (design) studies because I have a (great) passion for design and would like to make it my future profession.
  • You can omit the first "design" to avoid repetition (of "design").
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No, that's very awkward.

I've been working hard for my (design) studies because I have a (great) passion for design and would like to make it my future profession.

You can omit the first "design" to avoid repetition (of "design").
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