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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Is there anything wrong with this sentence
I am trying to find a job and in the process in writing a cover letter
I am wondering if this sentence makes sense to you
If you are seeking an individual who has excellent time management, who has excellent communication skills, and [who is as career-committed as it takes to achieve total success, then please consider what I have to offer.
I bolded the part where I am not sure if it make sense
hope you guys can help me out!!
thanks!
I am wondering if this sentence makes sense to you
If you are seeking an individual who has excellent time management, who has excellent communication skills, and [who is as career-committed as it takes to achieve total success, then please consider what I have to offer.
I bolded the part where I am not sure if it make sense
hope you guys can help me out!!
thanks!
Top answer
It makes sense, but is not very good English. Here is a suggestion: If you are seeking an individual who has excellent time management and communication skills, and will be committed to developing a successful career path within your company, then please consider what I have to offer.
- It makes sense, but is not very good English.
- Here is a suggestion: If you are seeking an individual who has excellent time management and communication skills, and will be committed to developing a successful career path within your company, then please consider what I have to offer.
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It makes sense, but is not very good English. Here is a suggestion:
If you are seeking an individual who has excellent time management and communication skills, and will be committed to developing a successful career path within your company, then please consider what I have to offer.
If you are seeking an individual who has excellent time management and communication skills, and will be committed to developing a successful career path within your company, then please consider what I have to offer.
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