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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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Is there anything wrong with this sentence?

Lately, alone means serious work, which I can fully immerse myself in assignments and revision.

Hi guys, is there anything wrong with this sentence? I'm using this as the first sentence in my essay and Alone being the noun, is it okay ?
  

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It sounds very confusing as it stands. I suggest: Lately, being alone means serious work, where/when I can fully immerse myself in assignments and revision.

  • It sounds very confusing as it stands.
  • I suggest: Lately, being alone means serious work, where/when I can fully immerse myself in assignments and revision.
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It sounds very confusing as it stands. I suggest:

Lately, being alone means serious work, where/when I can fully immerse myself in assignments and revision.

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