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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Is there anything wrong with this?
I do not want this redone. but could someone please tell me if this is correct grammatically etc, and what slight modifications could be made to make it better (in terms of grammar and punctuation)
An advertisement, as well as promoting a product or service, can also contain messages in
the form of connotation and different discourses, that affect peoples views on life in
general. Advertisers put certain texts, such as images and writing, into the
advertisement which can support or oppose a cultures dominant belief on a topic,
and in doing so, can help to advertise the product. Discourses such as gender,
family, class, technology and race are present in the Mitsubishi Motors advertisement
which are all put in place to help market the merchandise. Certain denotations and
the signified meaning in unison with certain discourses will be analysed to
find the true social and cultural messages.
thank you
An advertisement, as well as promoting a product or service, can also contain messages in
the form of connotation and different discourses, that affect peoples views on life in
general. Advertisers put certain texts, such as images and writing, into the
advertisement which can support or oppose a cultures dominant belief on a topic,
and in doing so, can help to advertise the product. Discourses such as gender,
family, class, technology and race are present in the Mitsubishi Motors advertisement
which are all put in place to help market the merchandise. Certain denotations and
the signified meaning in unison with certain discourses will be analysed to
find the true social and cultural messages.
thank you
Top answer
I have underlined some problem areas: An advertisement, as well as promoting a product or service, can also contain messages in the form of connotation and different discourses, that affect peoples views on life in general. Advertisers put certain texts, such as images and writing, into the advertisement which can support or oppose a cultures dominant belief on a topic, and in doing so, can help to advertise the product. Discourses such as gender, family, class, technology and race are present in the Mitsubishi Motors advertisement which are all put in place to help market the merchandise.
- I have underlined some problem areas: An advertisement, as well as promoting a product or service, can also contain messages in the form of connotation and different discourses, that affect peoples views on life in general.
- Advertisers put certain texts, such as images and writing, into the advertisement which can support or oppose a cultures dominant belief on a topic, and in doing so, can help to advertise the product.
- Discourses such as gender, family, class, technology and race are present in the Mitsubishi Motors advertisement which are all put in place to help market the merchandise.
- Certain denotations and the signified meaning in unison with certain discourses will be analysed to find the true social and cultural messages.
- Most of your problems are word choice-- leading to your thesis being almost inscrutable.
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I have underlined some problem areas:
An advertisement, as well as promoting a product or service, can also contain messages in
the form of connotation and different discourses, that affect peoples views on life in
general. Advertisers put certain texts, such as images and writing, into the
advertisement which can support or oppose a culture
I have underlined some problem areas:
An advertisement, as well as promoting a product or service, can also contain messages in
the form of connotation and different discourses, that affect peoples views on life in
general. Advertisers put certain texts, such as images and writing, into the
advertisement which can support or oppose a culture
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