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Introduction: I have chosen to write about football in the U.K because I think: It is Necessary to know something about it specially when you work with the UK area study. It is on of the things the United Kingdom are know for in the world. It is a topic, which I am interested in. Problem formulation:  I want to answer to these questions in my problem formulation: What do they call the professional football league in U.K? How old is it? How many football clubs are in England? How many times should these clubs play the match every season? What is different between the football league in England and the other countries in U.K? I will present some football clubs and football players while i will answer to these questions.Overview of relevant methods: I chose to investigate my topic by reading some books and search the web, because I think these methods can meet my requirements, which are to be true and to be updated.Conclusion: I want to talk about: What would I gain by answering these questions? Could I do it? Perspectives: I want to compare football in UK with football in Denmark and explain what is different between these countries? Do they have the same rules for football?

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Introduction: I have chosen to write about football in the U.K because I think:
It is Necessary to know something about it specially when you work with the UK area study.
It is on of the things the United Kingdom are know for in the world.
It is a topic, which I am interested in.

Problem formulation: I want to answer to these questions in my problem formulation:
What do they call the professional football league in the U.K?
How old is it?
How many football clubs are in England?
How many times should these clubs play the match every season?
What is different between the football league in England and the other countries in the U.K?

I will present some football clubs and football players while i will answer to these questions.

Overview of relevant methods: I chose to investigate my topic by reading some books and search the web, because I think these methods can meet my requirements, which are to be true and to be updated.

Conclusion: I want to talk about:
What would I gain by answering these questions?
Could I do it?
Perspectives: I want to compare football in the UK with football in Denmark and explain what is different between these countries? Do they have the same rules for football?

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