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Anonymous Posted 6 years ago
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Is there anything I could do to make this more natural?
Is there anything I could do to make this more natural? How would you write it?
Jimmy stood waiting alone at a bus stop on the outskirts of the city, gazing toward the high-rise buildings of the city center towering up a few miles away.
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anonymous Is there anything I could do to make this more natural? How would you write it? The question is how would you write it?
- anonymous Is there anything I could do to make this more natural?
- How would you write it?
- The question is how would you write it?
- " The repetition of "of the city" had to go.
- "High-rise" is used of apartment buildings, and "towering up" takes care of the height, anyhow.
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anonymousIs there anything I could do to make this more natural? How would you write it?
The question is how would you write it? There are a million ways to write that, but, changing as little as possible, "Jimmy stood waiting alone at a bus stop on the outskirts of the city, gazing toward the buildings towering up a few miles away downtown." The repetition
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