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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Dear Sir/Madam,

We are a 4-star deluxe hotel in the City Centre of Argentine providing optimum service for a comfortable stay in our elegantly designed rooms. Coupled with impeccable amenities for business travelers; including a high speed wireless internet connection, exquisite cuisines to dine in our two restaurants, The Market and Bistro offers international food specialties from breakfast through dinner. A cocktail evening is also open to relax and unwind after a hard work day at the most popular Night Club in town. Or head to a casual drink to our Bar Lounge located at the ground level of our hotel.
Our attention to detail and our friendly, experienced staff have managed to create a thriving business with guest satisfaction. We at L Hotel are always focusing to provide quality and optimum service to our varied discerning guests and clients.

I am writing to you to enquire about establishing a networking relationship between both our companies. Or maybe you and your group will be having an upcoming business travel to Argentine, please consider our hotel to book your stay with us at value for money and enjoy our hosts of room amenities, dining options, entertainment to health club facilities.
I look forward to your positive response and long-lasting business relationships. We can also provide processing and issuance of visa in Argentina. Should you have any questions and/or concerns, please feel free to contact me directly and I'll be glad to assist you.

Thank you so much.
P.S. Also attached is our brief product presentation.
  

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Dear Sir/Madam, We are the L ___ Hotel, a 4-star-rated luxury hotel in _____ , Argentina. We are located in what is known as the City Centre of ______ , which is literally the heart of the city of ______ . Our rooms are of elegant design and our service is optimum, the absolute very best, which assures a comfortable stay when visiting ______ either as a business traveler, or as a tourist.

  • Dear Sir/Madam, We are the L ___ Hotel, a 4-star-rated luxury hotel in _____ , Argentina.
  • We are located in what is known as the City Centre of ______ , which is literally the heart of the city of ______ .
  • Our rooms are of elegant design and our service is optimum, the absolute very best, which assures a comfortable stay when visiting ______ either as a business traveler, or as a tourist.
  • Our amenities are compete and impeccable, including high speed internet.
  • Our two restaurants, the _____ Market and the _____ Bistro, offer exquisite international cuisine for breakfast, lunch, and dinner.
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Dear Sir/Madam,

We are the L___ Hotel, a 4-star-rated luxury hotel in _____ , Argentina. We are located in what is known as the City Centre of ______ , which is literally the heart of the city of ______ .

Our rooms are of elegant design and our service is optimum, the absolute very best, which assures a comfortable stay when visiting ______ either as a business

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