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Sleepingbeauty Posted 20 years ago
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Is there anyone can help me to correct following sentences with structure an grammar thanks
I was a volunteer guide on Massey University's Open Day, 25 August 2006, helping out new students who could not find the building they were going to.
Actually, the job was boring. I was just standing a designted area, if somebody need help, they will come and ask me. If they could find the way by their own, i got nothing to do.
However, i met a girl who doing the volunteer as me. She is very nice and easy-going. We talked a lot, we took pictures together and had lunch together. Finally, we became a good friend.
That day was my first time doing volunteer job, the job was boring but i am happy as i make a new friend.
I was a volunteer guide on Massey University's Open Day, 25 August 2006, helping out new students who could not find the building they were going to.
Actually, the job was boring. I was just standing a designted area, if somebody need help, they will come and ask me. If they could find the way by their own, i got nothing to do.
However, i met a girl who doing the volunteer as me. She is very nice and easy-going. We talked a lot, we took pictures together and had lunch together. Finally, we became a good friend.
That day was my first time doing volunteer job, the job was boring but i am happy as i make a new friend.
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Hello SB I'll underline the parts that need more attention. If you post your revised answers, we'll check them for you. I was a volunteer guide on Massey University's Open Day, 25 August 2006, helping out new students who could not find the building they were going to.
- Hello SB I'll underline the parts that need more attention.
- If you post your revised answers, we'll check them for you.
- I was a volunteer guide on Massey University's Open Day, 25 August 2006, helping out new students who could not find the building they were going to.
- Actually, the job was boring.
- I was just standing a designted area , if somebody need help , they will come and ask m e.
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Hello SB
I'll underline the parts that need more attention. If you post your revised answers, we'll check them for you.
I was a volunteer guide on Massey University's Open Day, 25 August 2006, helping out new students who could not find the building they were going to.
Actually, the job was boring.
I'll underline the parts that need more attention. If you post your revised answers, we'll check them for you.
I was a volunteer guide on Massey University's Open Day, 25 August 2006, helping out new students who could not find the building they were going to.
Actually, the job was boring.
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