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Is there any thing wrong the below eassy? I an eassy which should have a theiss statement and then the other topic will be based on that statement. Please correct me if I made any grammertical mistake. Moreover, it should also have 1 one intro paragraph and one concluding paragraph.

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about my room

The most organized room in my house is where I live. My room not only organized but also a very cheerful and upbeat place; it has a balcony, a bathroom, a small number of furniture and a personal computer.

My room is very cheerful and upbeat place because it is very clean and organized. I keep my room neat and clean all by myself. I always keep some snacks and toast nearby my reading table so that I can eat, during my late-night work. In addition, my room is a complete package for me.

it gives a great outlook of sunny and rainy weather through its balcony. In rainy season, very often I took a cup of coffee and enjoy it in my balcony. Sunny weathers are also very amusing in my balcony between the time of afternoon and evening. In spite of all those pleasures, my balcony gets the most dirt and I have to clean it every day, which is very annoying.

it has an attached bath, and it is very big than it should be; and it is fixed near by the balcony. There are three buckets, one mug, one sink and a mirror in my bathroom. In addition, twice in a week I wash my dirty clothes in my bath, and once a week I clean the whole bath all by myself.

Moreover, there is also a small number of furniture and a personal computer left to know brief about. There are two strong wooden tables in front of my room’s door, one of those I use to read books and complete my assignments and the other one is for my personal computer. A wardrobe is also situated near by those two tables and a single bed behind that wardrobe. My room has enough light in the day time, however it is very big than it should, and that is why there are three lights to keep it bright. I have a standing fan in the middle of my room, which gives a very distinguish ugly outlook; however the pleasure of its wind is indescribable. In spite of all those good and bad facts, I really like my room.

Thanks

AukI